Well this doesn't seem like your first attempt at drama seems like you've done this before with the obvious symbolism that he drowned himself although that's a bit unrealistic how he would react like that to being told what his father told him Now I was not sad but I can see how others were it's more dark from your colorful or paper animated other animations also did he just not know how to swim I mean I know he wanted to kill himself but that was not explained the last part I would have to say is that the fog and mist effects worked well with the dreary sludge of darkened grunge attitude towards the general population